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Amazing work -- My icon is from this special pic for me: [link] Hey,I have the same guitar! XD Well almost...the difference is that mine has 2 wholes,instead of just one.
Great pic anyway! I really like it! >w< -- Beatbox! I rarely see them at all anywhere!
And the sleeping guy is made of win. Win and awesome just haaaaaaad a baby. ^~^ -- If Ellen can get on the cover of O magazine, then my goal is to get a million comments! Bring on the pain! ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~ The one-L lama, he's a priest The two-L llama, he's a beast And I would bet a silk pyjama There isn't any three-L lllama Woow what a neat job!!
One question, how to make all those clean lines? -- Nothing is too hard or too easy. Everything takes up an effort to do. Visit my Livejournal: [link] That's where I develop my novel project or other art works. |
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The small things, like the poster of the tree to the plug in the wall make the room feel lived in by these three. The grains in the wood, the pattern of the bed sheets, the small light on the (laptop?) is what makes this piece pop and thrive, truly fun to look at.
While the only minor flaws of this pic is the angle of the brunette's left leg (looks as if it would be a bit painful to sit like that) it is one of the best pictures I have had the pleasure of coming across here on DA.
Like what the above critique'r' said, I feel the left leg of the girl on the bed looks a little strange, although I admit, my legs and feet can twist that way w/o feeling uncomfortable or weird. Maybe it's just me, but I feel the angle of her leg, compared to the angle of the bed looks a little strange. But it's better than what I could accomplish from that kind of a pose LOL.
Also, another thing that wasn't mentioned, the girl sitting across from the girl on the bed, in the green, I'm really anal about pockets haha. I feel like the pockets look a little too small, making her behind look abnormally large compared to her thighs. I think the tiny pockets just give it that illusion, but that's just me LOL.
I really like how expressive the eyes are. The whites of their eyes look almost a little too shaded, to the point of where they don't look that white anymore. Maybe adding a little bit of a glare on the whites of their eyes too might make the eyes not look so flat. They're very clean and prominent though, something a have a hard time with.
kudos to you, seriously! This piece is ABSOLUTELY amazing
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