Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour


Submitted on
October 11, 2009
Image Size
627 KB


27,933 (2 today)
2,421 (who?)


Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
Jamming by lires Jamming by lires
A small amateur acoustic band.
Add a Comment:
Now "Normally" I like to do critiques that state both the good and bad and about the picture... But when I come across pictures like this I just get mad. That's because you just can't find anything wrong with it and you you have to pick at minor details that mostly no one notices. Like the angle of the left leg of the girl on the bed it just does seem right. Or hoe big her for head is and boy she has some black dots, (don't know if they are moles, freckles, or something else.) But I just think that gives her character.

But in the end I love the feeling the picture give off. And the color selection and style. The angle and positioning of the room is appealing to the eyes. Also you can tell time went into this.

Keep up the work and cant wait for the next one.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
52 out of 55 deviants thought this was fair.

This is so amazing... Everytime I come across it in my favourites, I just have to click on it and enlarge it. The lighting sets the mood almost perfectly, and everything, every single line, looks so clean and 'correct' for lack of better words. I have an awful time with straight edge objects, such as shelves or beds. I like to draw humans and animals, so when I see an artist who can accomplish BOTH amazingly, I'm immediately in awe, cause I can't do it to save my life haha.

Like what the above critique'r' said, I feel the left leg of the girl on the bed looks a little strange, although I admit, my legs and feet can twist that way w/o feeling uncomfortable or weird. Maybe it's just me, but I feel the angle of her leg, compared to the angle of the bed looks a little strange. But it's better than what I could accomplish from that kind of a pose LOL.

Also, another thing that wasn't mentioned, the girl sitting across from the girl on the bed, in the green, I'm really anal about pockets haha. I feel like the pockets look a little too small, making her behind look abnormally large compared to her thighs. I think the tiny pockets just give it that illusion, but that's just me LOL.

I really like how expressive the eyes are. The whites of their eyes look almost a little too shaded, to the point of where they don't look that white anymore. Maybe adding a little bit of a glare on the whites of their eyes too might make the eyes not look so flat. They're very clean and prominent though, something a have a hard time with.

kudos to you, seriously! This piece is ABSOLUTELY amazing :heart: I wish I could fav it 500 times over!
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
53 out of 53 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

marshmeryll Jun 30, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
aww. this is so cute! :D
Nerd-Wannabe Dec 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer

really love it!!!
VelocityRiot Nov 9, 2009  Student General Artist
Like, seriously! I love your shading style, and the guitars and the whole picture!
I tried that sitting position. It's uncomfortable, but doable. This picture captures the ambiance of the moment, makes me want to be there.
Add a Comment: