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A small amateur acoustic band.
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Now "Normally" I like to do critiques that state both the good and bad and about the picture... But when I come across pictures like this I just get mad. That's because you just can't find anything wrong with it and you you have to pick at minor details that mostly no one notices. Like the angle of the left leg of the girl on the bed it just does seem right. Or hoe big her for head is and boy she has some black dots, (don't know if they are moles, freckles, or something else.) But I just think that gives her character.

But in the end I love the feeling the picture give off. And the color selection and style. The angle and positioning of the room is appealing to the eyes. Also you can tell time went into this.

Keep up the work and cant wait for the next one.
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This is so amazing... Everytime I come across it in my favourites, I just have to click on it and enlarge it. The lighting sets the mood almost perfectly, and everything, every single line, looks so clean and 'correct' for lack of better words. I have an awful time with straight edge objects, such as shelves or beds. I like to draw humans and animals, so when I see an artist who can accomplish BOTH amazingly, I'm immediately in awe, cause I can't do it to save my life haha.

Like what the above critique'r' said, I feel the left leg of the girl on the bed looks a little strange, although I admit, my legs and feet can twist that way w/o feeling uncomfortable or weird. Maybe it's just me, but I feel the angle of her leg, compared to the angle of the bed looks a little strange. But it's better than what I could accomplish from that kind of a pose LOL.

Also, another thing that wasn't mentioned, the girl sitting across from the girl on the bed, in the green, I'm really anal about pockets haha. I feel like the pockets look a little too small, making her behind look abnormally large compared to her thighs. I think the tiny pockets just give it that illusion, but that's just me LOL.

I really like how expressive the eyes are. The whites of their eyes look almost a little too shaded, to the point of where they don't look that white anymore. Maybe adding a little bit of a glare on the whites of their eyes too might make the eyes not look so flat. They're very clean and prominent though, something a have a hard time with.

kudos to you, seriously! This piece is ABSOLUTELY amazing :heart: I wish I could fav it 500 times over!
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you! :D
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SqueezyBear Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Yery detailed,it's really good
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. :)
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JackieStarSister Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I like this, well done. :)
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. :)
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Fehnwrites Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is adorable and so detailed... even down to the plug on the wall. Fantastic job <3
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fye02 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
poor guy
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tarotski Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
hehe tnx ser!^^
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
guhit lang ng guhit :)
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:icontarotski:
tarotski Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student General Artist
no prob!ang gaganda po ng gawa nyu nkaka inspire!
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :)
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tarotski Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student General Artist
whoa!superb artistry!!!!
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oneoftheanimals Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011
i like everything about this :0 the lighting is wonderful
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:iconmarshmeryll:
marshmeryll Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
aww. this is so cute! :D
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DarqTalon-Azel Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Musta been a nice jamming sequence! LOL :D
Really nice. The perspective, the colors, the shade, everything fits perfectly, if I may say.
Like it a lot. Hmm...maybe like is too little of a word. I love it. :) Great art.
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Ginryuzaki Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
i really love the colors~ :iconkokorox:
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
you're welcome. :)
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Agiot Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011
Thank you very much for your answer ^.^
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Lustado Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
like it soo much,.. like the colors, the room and the girls..soo cool..u have a very good hands..
Wish I know how to play guitar.
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
A4 in 600dpi. :)
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:iconagiot:
Agiot Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
What resolution and size do you usally use ?
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
yes. :)
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geminian-4ever Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
zee preetinees iz creeping up on me...haha
ang galing!
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:iconagiot:
Agiot Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
How do you get those thin lines of yours? Do you use a high resolution and canvas size?
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:icondholefire:
Dholefire Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it!
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
in the philippines.
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:iconblindstingray:
BlindStingray Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
where can I find cool female guitar players? :0
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:icondeciple:
deciple Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pinagpala ang kamay mo bro. . . great perspectives, pati lighting... you are blessed.
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PurpleTermites Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
thats exactly how i imagine bands to be '^^
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Nerd-Wannabe Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing..
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
:?
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:iconazureanloss:
AzureanLoss Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beck 2. haha
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reijisakamoto Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010
It's a PRO work!
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:iconletters-to-nobody:
letters-to-nobody Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2010
looks so cumfy :)
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:iconwishberry:
wishberry Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2010  Student General Artist
ees preetee ^^
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princess-CIRP4ever Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
nice pic!!
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Shinohara-Harumi Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ang galing! :woohoo:
haha and ang cute nung guy!
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bettysaur Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010
Sweet. (;
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:icondeadeyesartist:
deadeyesartist Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
Excellent!

‎"Using Your Imagination to Make Things Happen"
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attichermit Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2010  Student General Artist
galing!!! ahahah... sana ako rin ganyan T^T ... asteeeggggg talaga mga Pinoy! (^.^)b
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kahlil001x Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010
.. .kawawa nga..
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:icontezjka:
tezjka Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
wELCOME!!

really love it!!!
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PowerPuffPastry Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010
HOLYCANOLE, 2000 FAVORITES???
WOW. Hey, you deserve it. : D
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WeirdCircus9 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how you make bedrooms! So cool and modern! :heart:
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:iconheartwielder:
heartwielder Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
no problem :)
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you. :)
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:iconheartwielder:
heartwielder Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
beautiful wok my friend, the lighting is just genius, and the anatomy is great! I love the expresssions and the detail in this, just amazing
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lorain05 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome! :D
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MisdermeanerJ Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Filmographer
Whenever you get the time. LOL. I could wait for like years LMAO. I wish to learn the magic of BG's. :D
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:iconlires:
lires Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
i guess so. but not now i think. :)
a bit busy with a lot of things. :D
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